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		<title>Comment on Things You May Not Believe When You Learn How to Write a Story&#8230; by Del Solu</title>
		<link>http://howtowriteastory.wordpress.com/2007/08/22/things-you-may-not-believe-when-you-learn-how-to-write-a-story/#comment-355</link>
		<dc:creator>Del Solu</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 02 Jun 2008 18:45:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good points you have there.</description>
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		<title>Comment on Things You May Not Believe When You Learn How to Write a Story&#8230; by Nikki</title>
		<link>http://howtowriteastory.wordpress.com/2007/08/22/things-you-may-not-believe-when-you-learn-how-to-write-a-story/#comment-354</link>
		<dc:creator>Nikki</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 31 May 2008 13:37:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>One of my most recent writing professors used to tell me to &quot;kill my darlings&quot; all the time. I&#039;d submit a story that I&#039;d poured so much effort into...upwards of 2 or 3 thousand words. He would tell me to cut the story in half - an impossible feat for me. I actually cringed when I highlighted a sentence and hit the delete key. I realized I became so attached to my words that I couldn&#039;t see when they detracted from my writing.

It&#039;s still something I have trouble with - it goes along with &quot;use fewer words.&quot; 

Thanks for the concise words of wisdom for your fellow writers.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>One of my most recent writing professors used to tell me to &#8220;kill my darlings&#8221; all the time. I&#8217;d submit a story that I&#8217;d poured so much effort into&#8230;upwards of 2 or 3 thousand words. He would tell me to cut the story in half &#8211; an impossible feat for me. I actually cringed when I highlighted a sentence and hit the delete key. I realized I became so attached to my words that I couldn&#8217;t see when they detracted from my writing.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s still something I have trouble with &#8211; it goes along with &#8220;use fewer words.&#8221; </p>
<p>Thanks for the concise words of wisdom for your fellow writers.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Things You May Not Believe When You Learn How to Write a Story&#8230; by Mazri</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mazri</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 May 2008 03:32:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good work. I always use rewrite generator for my artcle or story. It help me alot.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good work. I always use rewrite generator for my artcle or story. It help me alot.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Things You May Not Believe When You Learn How to Write a Story&#8230; by lethebashar</title>
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		<dc:creator>lethebashar</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 24 May 2008 03:28:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Helpful list.  To it I would add:  use contrast.  Contrast is one of a novelist&#039;s secret strengths whether she opposes character types or shows contrast within a character.  I liked &quot;kill your darlings&quot;.  This is something I need to remember.  Thanks.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Helpful list.  To it I would add:  use contrast.  Contrast is one of a novelist&#8217;s secret strengths whether she opposes character types or shows contrast within a character.  I liked &#8220;kill your darlings&#8221;.  This is something I need to remember.  Thanks.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Get Lost? by keithmansfield</title>
		<link>http://howtowriteastory.wordpress.com/2007/08/23/get-lost/#comment-347</link>
		<dc:creator>keithmansfield</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 14 Apr 2008 13:34:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This is, indeed, the curse of the novelist. Whenever I&#039;m reading or watching anything I&#039;m working out the plot twists - I used to presume that everybody did it, but I&#039;ve discovered to my cost (when I share my thoughts!) that it&#039;s not normal behaviour.

I gave up on Lost after the first series, largely because they seemed to be making it up as they went along. Now I look forward to discovering if you&#039;re right.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is, indeed, the curse of the novelist. Whenever I&#8217;m reading or watching anything I&#8217;m working out the plot twists &#8211; I used to presume that everybody did it, but I&#8217;ve discovered to my cost (when I share my thoughts!) that it&#8217;s not normal behaviour.</p>
<p>I gave up on Lost after the first series, largely because they seemed to be making it up as they went along. Now I look forward to discovering if you&#8217;re right.</p>
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		<title>Comment on How to Write a Story: Write Short Stories by forgewrite</title>
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		<dc:creator>forgewrite</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 12 Apr 2008 20:20:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thank you again,

The time and effort that you put into your posts is clearly visible.

They are really informative articles.

I was also really happy to see that part about &quot;in late out early&quot;.

That has been a topic on my blog as well.

Thanks again

Happy Writing,
Nick</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you again,</p>
<p>The time and effort that you put into your posts is clearly visible.</p>
<p>They are really informative articles.</p>
<p>I was also really happy to see that part about &#8220;in late out early&#8221;.</p>
<p>That has been a topic on my blog as well.</p>
<p>Thanks again</p>
<p>Happy Writing,<br />
Nick</p>
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		<title>Comment on Get Lost? by Jess w</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jess w</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Apr 2008 20:57:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I see what you mean about lost but since watching series 4 it seems your theory isn&#039;t correct. I might be wrong but It is still impressive how you can work things like that out.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I see what you mean about lost but since watching series 4 it seems your theory isn&#8217;t correct. I might be wrong but It is still impressive how you can work things like that out.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Get Lost? by ambiguousartisan</title>
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		<dc:creator>ambiguousartisan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 02 Apr 2008 12:41:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Not a bad idea.. however it hasn&#039;t quite panned out like that huh :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Not a bad idea.. however it hasn&#8217;t quite panned out like that huh <img src='http://s.wordpress.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>Comment on How to Write a Story: The Premise by David S</title>
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		<dc:creator>David S</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 26 Mar 2008 17:47:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Just as I remember my old English teacher tell it. If you have no idea what you want to say in one sentance then you cannot possibly say it in a thousand.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Just as I remember my old English teacher tell it. If you have no idea what you want to say in one sentance then you cannot possibly say it in a thousand.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Things You May Not Believe When You Learn How to Write a Story&#8230; by David S</title>
		<link>http://howtowriteastory.wordpress.com/2007/08/22/things-you-may-not-believe-when-you-learn-how-to-write-a-story/#comment-339</link>
		<dc:creator>David S</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 26 Mar 2008 17:42:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great stuff for us who dream of seeing our name in print. I liked the fact that it was easy to follow and understand. Any help gratefully appreciated.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great stuff for us who dream of seeing our name in print. I liked the fact that it was easy to follow and understand. Any help gratefully appreciated.</p>
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